I was nervously running to the crime scene.
It was my first detective assignment.
She was passing by, serene,
carrying a bucket.
I thought:
"She is too pretty for a cleaning lady".
I feared:
"You are too stupid for a detective, Maddie".
My confidence won.
Elegantly dressed Dragon Butterfly
Will be in the jail for long.
It was my first detective assignment.
She was passing by, serene,
carrying a bucket.
I thought:
"She is too pretty for a cleaning lady".
I feared:
"You are too stupid for a detective, Maddie".
My confidence won.
Elegantly dressed Dragon Butterfly
Will be in the jail for long.
clever!!! i love it--good use of the bucket :D
ReplyDeletethe good-looking women should always be under suspicion :DD
Fantastic! I love what you did with the prompts Vesna!
ReplyDeleteWell, as they say "Don't be fooled by the appearance"!!:)
ReplyDeleteVery very nice story, Vesna, and nice writting too. And,tell me, is the Dragon Butterfly "our" Dragon? Did she take a vacation from all the mirrors around her to come and meet a detective in your story?:S
Sorry, lately I see love almost everywhere...:D
Superb! You make the story so active since she arrives running, late. Her first assingment :).
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