Friday, March 12, 2010

Detective Maddie

I was nervously running to the crime scene.
It was my first detective assignment.
She was passing by, serene,
carrying a bucket.

I thought:
"She is too pretty for a cleaning lady".
I feared:
"You are too stupid for a detective, Maddie".

My confidence won.
Elegantly dressed Dragon Butterfly
Will be in the jail for long.


4 comments:

  1. clever!!! i love it--good use of the bucket :D
    the good-looking women should always be under suspicion :DD

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  2. Fantastic! I love what you did with the prompts Vesna!

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  3. Well, as they say "Don't be fooled by the appearance"!!:)
    Very very nice story, Vesna, and nice writting too. And,tell me, is the Dragon Butterfly "our" Dragon? Did she take a vacation from all the mirrors around her to come and meet a detective in your story?:S
    Sorry, lately I see love almost everywhere...:D

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  4. Superb! You make the story so active since she arrives running, late. Her first assingment :).

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